Kia ora i'm Olivia from Yaldhurst Model school I liked the way you said you wanted to come another time and how you said please. Something you could improve on is writing more about how fun it was and if you guys enjoyed it and how much. So next time you could add more writing or maybe even a bit of description at the top of some photos.
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Kia ora i'm Olivia from Yaldhurst Model school
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you said you wanted to come another time and how you said please.
Something you could improve on is writing more about how fun it was and if you guys enjoyed it and how much.
So next time you could add more writing or maybe even a bit of description at the top of some photos.
Why did you go ice skating?
Kind regards Olivia🐶
Kia ora Olivia, this is TK class :)
ReplyDeleteThank you for your nice comments. We really love that you you liked our skating BLOG.
If you go too fast you have to slow down or you will fall over!
We wanted to try something new and we wanted to learn to skate. Skating is great fun and some of us have been before and we wanted to go again!
We hope that you can go skating one day too!
Kindest regards,
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